Friday, September 11, 2009

EDRG 3344 TR


Writing is a PROCESS.....

1. Prewriting- brainstorm/maps
2. drafting- rough draft / outline
3. revising- additions/ deletions
4. editing- convention/ check for errors
5. publishing- finished work


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I Won The Lottery!
One day I went to Diamond Shamrock and bought a lottery ticket. To my surprise I had the winning lottery numbers. I laid out my plans to decide how to spend all of the eighty million dollars I had just won.
The first thing I had to do was to get away and take a vacation. I decided to go and visit Disneyland in California. We rode the roller coaster and watched the shows. While in California we spent three days having lots of fun. Our next destination was to visit New York. We went to see the Empire State Building and Ground Zero. We walked all over the city taking pictures and finally ended up in Rockefeller Center. New York was a beautiful city.
The next thing I had to do was spend the money. I paid off all of my bills. I went to Savannah Heights and purchased five acres of land. We contacted Tilson Homes and designed our dream house, which had five bedrooms and two and a half baths. The outside was all done in red brick and had a metal roof. The backyard had a beautiful spacious garden.
The last thing I had left to do was share the wealth. I purchased a brand new home for my mother and a new Hummer to match. My sister needed a trustworthy vehicle so I bought her a bright red Ford F-250 with Ranchhand bumpers. I bought my father in law twelve cows to add to his ranch. my family then took a fourteen day luxury cruise to relax.
The day I won the lottery I had lots of fun. I took much needed vacations. I had the opportunity to build my dream home and share the wealth with my family. Winning the lottery was lots of fun and brought joy to me and my family.

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